文章摘要：一、以下四種手段是增加句子復雜性的常見方法，也是得高分的“亮點”。1。改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z置于句首，或用分詞做狀語等。[原文]We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning。

一、以下四種手段是增加句子復雜性的常見方法，也是得高分的“亮點”。

1.改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語。可以把狀語置于句首，或用分詞做狀語等。

[原文]We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.[修正]Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.[原文]The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.

[修正]Hearing the bad news， the young man couldnt help crying.

2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調句、主從復合句、分詞狀語等。

①強調句

[原文]My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely.[修正]My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.

②由what等引導的從句，此處的what相當于中文的“所......”，有很大的概括力，如:

[原文]We had to stand there to catch the offender.

[修正]What we had to do was (to) stand there， trying to catch the offender.

What China has achieved in recent years is known through the world.

China is no longer what it used to be.

③由with或without引導的短語。如:

He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.

④分詞短語。如:

Satisfied with the result， He decided to go on with a new experiment.

⑤倒裝句。如:

Only in this way can we achieve our goal.

Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.

⑥略句。如:

If so， victory will be ours.

You can make some changes wherever necessary.

⑦對比，這是中文中也常用的方法。如:

When I play， I feel excited， and after it I feel relaxed.

3.通過分句和合句，增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。

[原文]He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.

[修正]He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

[原文]We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.Some told stories. Some played chess.

[修正]After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess.

4.學會使用過渡詞。如:

①遞進: then(然后)， besides(還有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等。

②轉折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the country(相反)， after all(畢竟)等。

③總結: finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(總之)， in conclusion(最后)等。

④強調: indeed(確實)， certainly(一定)， surely(確定)， above all(尤其)等。

⑤對比: in the same way(同樣地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand...on the other hand(一方面......另一方面......)等。

5.注意使用不同長度的句子。

二、對于“較復雜的詞匯”，可以從以下幾個方面著手。

1.注意使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。如:

[原文]A new railway is being built in my hometown.

[修正]A new railway is under construction in my hometown.

2.使用一些很有“洋味”的單詞。如:

Thank you for sharing the time with us.

The way he views the world is very practical.

3.避免重復使用某一單詞或短語。如:

[原文]I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

[修正]I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.